专题6 基础写作点拨 第2讲.ppt

选择以下句子的错误类型，并作出改正。 A．逻辑关系混乱而导致连词误用 B．从句中时态或语态使用错误 C．缺少连词 D．连词过多使用 E．缺少谓语 1．She sent me an e－mail，asking whether how I was getting along with my classmates.________ 改正：______________________________________________________________ 2．As time going by, more and more people prefer a healthy diet.________ 改正：①_____________________________________________________ ②____________________________________________________ 3．Work hard，youll make it some time.________ 改正：①___________________________________ ②______________________________________ 4．Because no one can live in a city with only one pound，so he had to ask his friends for help.________ 改正：___________________________________________________________ _________________ 5．They talked and talked and soon the bus comes.________ 改正：_______________________________________ 6．He went to her and gave her the present he had bought，and she refused to take it and went away.________ 改正：___________________________________________________________ _____________________ 为避免在写作过程中出现以上错误，需要有扎实的语法功底。下面就并列句及复合句的基础语法结合写作要求与大家共同探讨。 (一)并列句 用并列连词将两个简单句连接起来，便是并列句。 1．并列关系连词：and，not...but...，not only...but also...等。 天才在于勤奋，知识在于积累。 Talents come from diligence ________ knowledge is gained by accumulation. 他不仅英语说得对，也说的很流利。 ________ does he speak English correctly，________ he speaks it fluently. 2．转折关系连词：but，yet，while，whereas等。 这篇作文很好，然而仍有改进的空间。 The composition is all right，________ there is still room for improvement. 他一定有60多岁，而他的妻子看起来大约30岁。 He must be over sixty，________ his wife looks about thirty. 3．选择关系连词：or，either...or...，neither...nor...等。 理论没有实践不行，实践没有理论也不行。 ________ could theory do without practice，________ could practice do without theory. 4．因果关系连词：so，for，so表示结果，for表示原因，对前面的内容进行解释。 昨天晚上肯定下雨了，因为地面湿了。 It must have rained，________ the ground was wet. 注意：在使用neither...nor和not only...but also...连接两个并列句子时，neither，nor，not位于句首时，所在的句子必须使用部分倒装。 (二)名词性从句 名词性从句是重要的语法项目之一，也是写作中常用的高级表达之一。 1．主语从句——可以使写作内容更加丰富，主语的类型也会多样化，避免主语过于单调。 我们是否开运动会取决于天气