English writing培训讲解.ppt

Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom, for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if he had made any achievements. He said he only knew that the government said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country. 书面表达六步法 五、检查-改错-润色 注意时态、标点和拼写是否正确,要点是否完整，词数达标等。 抄 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. First, they greeted each other (← said “good morning” to each other),then they talked about Mr.Green’s son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom, for several years and wondered (←. He asked) if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought (←said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country. 书面表达六步法 六、誊写 修改后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。 卷面不工整要扣分! 抄 改 连 扩 抓 审 书面 表达 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Green’s son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Green’s son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country. 四、课堂练习 请用六步法写一篇短文 请根据下面的写作内容与要求写一篇英语短文，介绍李华的情况。 姓名 李华 性别 女 年龄 20 文化 程度 高中 身体 状况 健康 身高 1.6M 经历 高中毕业后曾在一家公司担任秘书一职 技能 英语说写能力较突出，在校期间曾获得英语竞赛一等奖（the first prize),会操作电脑，打字每分钟80字，有良好的交际能力（with good commun