公开课：应用文写作之建议信方案研究.ppt

应用文写作之建议信 How to write a persuasive letter of advice 第二节：书面表达（满分25分) 假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1. 邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2. 提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等 3．祝愿他学习取得进步。注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。 Dear?Mike,?? I?am?glad?to?receive?your?email?asking?for?my?advice?on?how? to?improve?your?Chinese?and?I?understand?your?problem.?? Here?is?my?advice?for?improving?your?Chinese.?Firstly,?speak? Chinese?more,?both?in?and?out?of?class.?Try?your?best?to?com-municate?with?your?classmates?in?Chinese.?Don’t?be?afraid?of? making?mistakes.??I?think?the?more?you?speak,?the?better?your? Chinese?will?be.?Secondly,?in?order?to?improve?your?listening,? pay?more?attention?to?TV?hosts?when?you?are?watching?TV?at? home.?I’m?sure?you?will?make?great?progress?sooner or later. In?conclusion,?I?wish?you?every?success?with?your?studies. Yours Faithfully, Li Hua A Letter of Advice Beginning: Writing purpose Main body: Advice/suggestions Ending: Wishes/words for encouragement HOW ? ? ? ? ? ? How to make your letter of advice more persuasive(说服力)? 写作难点： Which one is more persuasive and why? A Students probably should not smoke. First I don’t think smoking is healthy, especially for us students. Second, in my view, it is not good to develop the habit of smoking and it is hard to get rid of it. Lastly, I think cigarettes are very expensive and it costs a lot to buy them. In conclusion, my opinion is that students should not smoke. B There are three reasons why students should not smoke.?First, smoking is bad for one’s health. According to the Center for Disease Control, there are early signs of heart disease in young adults who smoke. Second, it is habit-forming. Statistics show that if students start to smoke, they