Writing 4结尾段和悲剧原则+搜集论据 雅思写作 大作文 小作文 学术.ppt

Writing 4 结尾段 评分细则3： Your conclusion should summarize your position for the reader and, if appropriate to the task instructions, present your final decision on a question. You can also be impartial, i,e, take no side, or state that you have no conclusion to draw. Your essay is incomplete without a conclusion because it does not reach a logical ending. 结尾段常用短语： To sum up, people are all different. In conclusion/ To conclude Overall/All in all Ultimately In the final analysis Clearly, In the end, Taking everything into consideration, For these reasons, I feel strongly that… Too many rules? 练习，并给出结尾段。 评价给出的结尾段。 You must cut a birthday cake into exactly eight pieces, but youre only allowed to make three straight cuts, and you cant move pieces of the cake as you cut. How can you do it? 悲剧原则 我花了时间和金钱，学习 科技和文化，但是由于政府提供的就业 环境不好，我卖猪肉杀人犯罪了，丧失了人权，媒体还把我曝光了。 时间Time Waste/Squander/Save Time-saving Time-consuming 金钱Money 学习Study-Education 科技Technology 文化Culture 政府Government 就业Employment 环境Environment 犯罪Crime 人权Human Rights 媒体Mass Media 2009年6月11日 Some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think it would be better to our environment and the economy if people only eat locally-produced food. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 找出以上题目的三角形，并各用一个句子写出A,B观点。 A: Eating locally has benefits. B: Eating locally has drawbacks. 用A,B两个观点选一个让步。 用A,B两个观点选一个进行解释说明。 用A,B两个观点选一个反驳。 用悲剧原则来Brainstorm好处和坏处。 参考自己想出来的素材，确定自己的观点。 确定文章结构，一边倒或者两面派，并列出提纲。 用35分钟的时间，写出整篇文章。 铅笔作文。 一个强调句，一个例子。 省时Eating locally is time-saving because it is much easier for transportation.+解释句 省钱Eating locally is money-saving as food produced locally is much cheaper than imported food.+解释句 促进经济Eating locally can promote local economy thus cultivate local employment.+解释句 有益环境Eating locally is beneficial to the environment because it is energy-saving and creates much less waste.+解释句 使用悲剧原则 2010年3月20日 With the technology developing rapidly, machines are used widely in our lives