基础写作描述景点培训资料.ppt

Basic Writing Introduce a place Lead in 1. Where were you born? 2. Do you like your birthplace/hometown? 3. Do you like Huizhou as your first or second hometown? 4. Describe something about Huizhou in your own words. Let’s write a composition about describing a place. (e.g. a country, a city, a place of interest…) Step 1 Learn some sentence structures and phrases 1. Location be located / lie （位于） in the center of （在…的中部） in / to /on the east/south/west/north of... Tip 1: The simple present tense is most probably used in this kind of writing. （在…的东/南/西/北部） 巽寮湾在惠州的东部。 Xunliao Bay lies in the east of Huizhou. 巽寮湾在惠州的东部，景色非常漂亮。 (locate) in the east of Huizhou, Xunliao Bay is very beautiful. Tip 2: Non-finite verbs（非谓语动词）(such as p.p.) is used to make your writing more colorful. Located 2. 历史： have/with a (long) history of 3. 人口： have/with a population of 1. 中国是一个拥有5,000年历史的国家。 China is a country with a long history of 5000 years. China has a long history of 5,000 years. 2. 美国有多久的历史？ How long is the history of the USA? More than 200 years. 广州有两千多年的历史, 有一千多万人口。 Tip 3: Use linking words, such as: “and, but, or, while”, etc. to combine two sentences. Guangzhou has a history of over 2,000 years and a population of more than 10 million. 4. 面积： cover /have /with an area of... square kilometres (具有…平方公里） 5. 气候： neither too cold nor too hot; warm; pleasant 6. 环境： with green hills and beautiful rivers/ be surrounded by mountains/beautiful scenery 7. 特色：be famous /well known for; be famous as Huizhou is a beautiful city _______________(surround) by mountains. surrounded What is Huizhou famous for? Huizhou is famous for the West Lake. 8. 名胜景观：a place with many tourist attractions, places of interest 9. 物产：be rich /abundant in… (富有…) Which place is the passage talking about? In ___________, there are many places of interest, such as Tian’anmen Square,the Summer Palace,the Temple of Heaven（天坛） and Beihai park. If you come