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根据短文内容，从下面方框中选择适当的单词或词组填空，使短文内容完整正确。 became interested in, in his spare time, out of control, is famous for, stay away My cousin is a boy who _______________his great talent at school. Most pf his teachers say he is a genius(天才). His parents are proud of him. He ______________________ studying astronomy（天文）when he was in Grade 8. He was crazy about it and he said he would be a great astronaut. He read lots of books on astronomy _______________. He told me that these books are the most exciting books of all. He even made a model plane and it could fly. The model plane flew about 200 meters before it went _______________. Sadly, he didn’t do well in his lessons and this made his father angry. His father warned him to ______________ from any books on astronomy and aerospace unless he could enter a key senior school. Make sentences better Tom got along with all of his neighbours . The man lived next door. Make your paragraph better He thought the police would be able to find the owner. The police came to Tom’s home and saw the necklace in his hand. A good report 1. Serve the theme (紧扣主题) 2. Have clear structure and good expressions (结构清晰、表达完整) 3. Have right spellings(单词拼写正确) 4. Avoid grammar mistakes (无语法错误) 5.Have nice writing and pay attention to punctuation (书写美观、注意标点) * Wang Hongmei Zhenjiang Experimental Secondary School Level one (useful expressions) select…from … 从……选择…… manage to do… 设法成功做…… try to do… 设法做…… be the pride of … ……的骄傲 be proud of … = take pride in…　　 以……为骄傲 … is famous for became interested in in his spare time out of control stay away Defining relative clause Relative pronouns Level two (sentences ) 句子表达 Neil Armstrong is the person______ walked on the moon. There are reports ______ say Armstrong and Aldrin saw the alien spacecraft. It is said that Neil Armstrong sent a message to Mission Control _______ said that two huge, strange objects landed near them and were watchin