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1. Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the work place. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university? What should be the main function of a university has become a hot debated issue nowadays. People hold two converse perspectives. Some of them assume that universities should provide graduates with the skills which are useful to an employer, while others support that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake. Considering these entirely different views, in terms of myself, even supposing that skills as well as working experience are playing a more and more important role in job-hunting, studying and exploring due academic knowledge should be the target of a university. Otherwise, what will be the difference between a university and an technical school? For instance, a student majoring in computer science of an technical school will be taught the skills about the using of computer software or how to repair a crashed computer. However, university students of the same major will learn the mathematical theory of the computer, the components of a CPU and so on. But when the college graduates go job-hunting, the employers perhaps do not need his knowledge of mathematics or other professional knowledge, but these kinds of knowledge give him a potential to do more flexible and difficult works, and the graduates of the technical school do not have this ability. (Why? 需要更多支持) Moreover, the former student will maintain all the skills the later has from the work practice in about half a year or more. That suggests that the university should take the responsibility of supplying more theoretical knowledge. 评分标准 具体评语 分数 任务反应TR 没有直接处理题目的要求，并且缺乏足够支持。 ?5 连贯衔接CC 逻辑性较差。 ?5 词汇资源LR 语法GRA