京华烟云四组课件.pptxVIP

京华烟云第四章沐恩光木兰入私塾 探亲戚曼娘交新朋杜金玉 赵铭南 崔水淼句子赏析原文：Standing in the center of the open hall was a well-dressed, short old woman, leaning on a red-lacquered stick, and wearing a black band on her head, sloping toward the sides, with a piece of green jade in the center. It was the grandmother.?译文：在敞开的大厅的中间立着的，是一个穿着讲究身材矮小的老太太，拄着红漆拐杖，头上戴着一个黑箍儿，黑箍儿在左右两边往下倾斜，正中间有一块绿玉。这正是祖母。?赏析：此段为祖母的外貌及动作描写。原文以动名词standing做主语，以leaning，wearing，sloping做伴随，形成了整齐的句子结构，后面又以with短语作后置定语表达“黑箍儿上面的绿玉”，使得整段结构错落有致，同时又将祖母的形态动作展现给读者。译文表达长短句交错，生动形象地将那个年代里，大家庭里典型的老祖母的形象展现给读者。电视剧版曾家老祖母史料记载清末民国初期老太太形象原文：Grandmother was doing all the talking and everybody listened, anxious to hear what he said, firstly, because she was the head of the family, and secondly, because she was a woman and the affairs of family reunion are the natural monopoly of woman, about which men have little to say.译文：老祖母一直说个没完，大家静静地听着，急于想听老太太说些什么。一则她老人家是一家之长，二则骨肉团聚时说话自然是女人独占的事，男人是没有份儿的。赏析：此段描述了一大家团聚之后，全家人都围着老祖母，以老祖母为中心聊天的其乐融融的场景。在这里，译者多用四字短语，如“the head of the family”译为“一家之长”，“reunion”译为“骨肉团聚”，译文符合汉语表达习惯，生动为妙地将中国大家庭的那种尊卑有序的传统展现给读者。2.原文：“Woman’s accomplishments” included primarily good cooking, neat sewing, fine embroidery, and if she was born in a scholar’ s family and taught to read, then also the ability to read and write, always a little poetry, but not enough to distract her mind and senses, a little history, and if possible, a little painting.?译文：“妇工”包括长于烹调，精于缝纫刺绣，若是生在读书之家，要能读能写，会点诗文，但不宜过于沉溺于词章以致分心误事，要稍知历史掌故，如能通绘事，自然更好。?赏析：此段介绍了“四德”中的“妇工”。原文连续的名词表达：“good cooking, neat sewing, fine embroidery”；并列的被动语态“was born……taught……”；并列的名词短语“a little poetry，a little history ，a little painting”使得原文结构整齐；译者将“good cooking”, “neat sewing”, “fine embroidery”增译为“长于烹调”，“精于缝纫刺绣”，符合汉语表达习惯。4.5. 原文：She seemed an antiquated rarity, like a picture that leaps out of the pages of an ancient book. Here was a type that apparently could not or did not survive in these modern days.译文：在民国初年，她似乎成了个难得一见的古董，好像 古书上掉下来的一幅美人图。在现代，那类典型是渺不可见到的，也不可能见到了。赏析：这是对曼娘的一段描述，她是一个典型的中国古代的传统女性，所以将她与古