漫画类议论文.ppt

Have you found the watch you have looking for? I find it hard to make friends with other children. If you suspect a gas leak, do not turn on an electric light. He remained silent until he had a better grasp of the situation. I didn’t catch the train for Guangzhou because I was held up by a car accident on my way. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is telling her that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear. It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it describes vividly parents’ distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line –“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet -“the underwear solution”! 仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写 仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写 From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children. 再叮嘱几句： 1. 保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 你不是父母！ 人称混乱！ 再叮嘱几句： 1. 保证三要素－体裁、时态、人称正确 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 ２. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误 1)误解图意 大忌！ 2) 企图幽默 可笑！ 3)不明寓意 白写！ 4)中心不明 混乱！ 再叮嘱几句： 1. 保证三要素－体裁、人称、时态正确 体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 ２. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误 ３. 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆） ４. 搞一精辟的结尾！！ Too short! Too long! 不要动不动就study