考研英语写作教程知识讲稿.ppt

句子不完整 The main point of my essay is that personal success only comes from. The main point of my essay is that personal success only comes from hardworking. 句子不完整 I will discuss in detail in the following paragraphs. I will discuss the issue in detail in the following paragraphs. 句子不完整 My roommate is so troublesome, I can hardly put up with him any more. My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly put up with him any more. My roommate is so troublesome, and I can hardly put up with him any more. 句子不完整 Smoking, drinking are not allowed in school. Smoking and drinking are not allowed in school. Smoking and alcohol are not allowed in school. 句子不完整 It is unclear Red Bull can help revive energy. It is unclear whether Red Bull can help revive energy. 句子不完整 The output of 2007 is more than 2006. The output of 2007 is more than the output of 2006. The output of 2007 is more than that of 2006. 句子不完整 It is advertisement makes some sports brands famous worldwide, such as Nike and Adidas. It is advertisement that makes some sports brands famous worldwide, such as Nike and Adidas. 句子不完整 Students spend too much time on TV, ignore their studies. Students spend too much time on TV, and ignore their studies. Students spend too much time on TV, ignoring their studies. 句子不完整 Many old buildings would collapse in a sudden, cause injuries and deaths to people. Many old buildings would collapse in a sudden, and cause injuries and deaths to people. Many old buildings would collapse in a sudden, causing injuries and deaths to people. 句子不完整 First of all, foreign countries, which create a wonderful language atmosphere for students. First of all, foreign countries create a wonderful language atmosphere for students. 句子成分多余 In China has more than 10 million people watch 《Prison Break》. More than 10 million people watch 《Prison Break》 in China. More than 10 million people watch Prison Break in China. There are more than 10 million viewers who watch Prison Break in China. 句