凤凰国际英语雅思写作4段落写作概述.ppt

好段落的特征 A typical example: Topic: Advantages of getting a good education (5 minutes of free writing) Finding its merits Getting a good education has many advantages. First, a good education means personal enrichment. A well-educated person is more knowledgeable and civilized. His life is also more meaningful. Second, with a good educational background, one has more opportunities to find a better job. Finally, armed with what education offers, one is likely to make a greater contribution to society and play a role in helping society to advance more rapidly. Logic Map of the Paragraph 主题句（段落只统帅）：getting a good education… advantages. 论证句1（统帅帐下大将1）：personal enrichment 论证句2（统帅帐下大将2）：personal enrichment 论证句3（统帅帐下大将3）：greater contribution to society Purpose how to write the topic sentence Three points: (1)a topic sentence must be a complete sentence, rather than a sentence fragment. (2) a topic sentence comes in two parts, topic words (indicating object to be discussed) and expression of thesis (indicating the particular aspect of the thesis). E.g. The Women Movement has had several effects on the English language. (3)a topic sentence can be neither too general nor too specific. how to write the topic sentence Position of the topic sentence: Topic sentence can be put in the beginning. Topic Sentence Supporting Sentences 一、段落的统一性 一个段落应该只说明一个问题，或一个问题的某一方面；应该只叙述一件事情， 或一件事情的某一个阶段。 也就是说，一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想以外的句子都是不可取的。 一个好的段落应该具有统一性。统一性就是一个中心思想统领整个段落。每个细节都应支持主题句，不应有无关的细节。为了支持主题，要尽可能多地提供细节，但又要避免滥用细节。 下图是一个有统一性的段落的结构图。 主题句(topic sentence） _______Supporting Sentence 1 __________ Supporting Sentence 2 ________________ Supporting Sentence 3 _____________________ Supporting Sentence 4 例文：Millions of years ago, Australia was linked to Asia by a land bridge. Then an earthquake caused the land bridge to sink. The sea rushed in, and Australia became an island. Later, this island b