2016新高考书面表达之事例写作.ppt

Passage 1: I made my dream of becoming a leader of the Students’ Union come true. plain appearance no chance to win an election strengths plans a whole year ahead of time a course on effective public speaking 2016考试说明参考试卷书面表达 回顾人生中经历的一些事情有助于我们对 过去进行思考。请用英语写一篇100 ~ 120 词的 短文，描述一件对你或你的家庭产生重大影响的事情，并略加评论。 Passage 1: I made my dream of becoming a leader of the Students’ Union come true. Passage 2: My husband got his lost suitcase back. Passage 3: I succeeded in finishing my first 10,000m race. I had long dreamed of becoming a leader of the Students Union. _______, my plain appearance prevented me from winning the elections, which _______ me. But I didn’t give up. ______, after weighing my strengths against my weaknesses, I began my election plans a whole year earlier, even attending a course on public speaking. _______, my hard work paid off. The next year saw my _______ in the election. I had long dreamed of becoming a leader of the Students Union. However, my plain appearance prevented me from winning the elections, which depressed me. But I didn’t give up. Instead, I made good use of my strengths, began my election plans a whole year earlier, and even attended a course on public speaking. As a result, my hard work paid off. The next year saw my victory in the election. connect sentences concise and precise Several days after my husband arrived in Sydney from India, he lost his suitcase with all his important papers, feeling lost and lonely in a strange city. Beyond expectation, however, a stranger phoned to say he had found my husband’s suitcase with all his papers and documents. Words failed to express the gratitude of my husband as well as my whole family. concise and precise connect sentences-----coherent Passage 3: I succeeded in finishing my first 10,000m race. didn’t know if … finish a 70-year-old man ran past me When I took part in my first 10,000m race, ___________________________. A 70-