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缺乏连贯性、层次不清 Bad sample 卷面不整洁， 涂改较多;层次不清;得8分 6分 Hello,everyone, I’m very honour to introduce our English club to you as a representative. During last two months, we organized many activities in our English club, and all of them were very meaningful. For example, we organized a activity which was named as “Speaking English the whole day”. During that day, all the members in our club can only speak English. So, on that day, all of us communicate with other students and teachers in English. After the activity, most of us found we became more and more confident while speaking English. And we all have a big progress in English-speaking. Besides, some of us think organizing the activities can improve our skills of organization. So, I want all of you to join us and than you can enjoy the happy from speaking English. 20分 内容要点完全；语句通顺，语言小错误多； 专家评改示范 Good afternoon, boys and girls. Today I want to talk about the experience of setting up the English club. Firstly, I feel like sharing the good result with you and telling some detail information about it. It was set up by me and classmates. For one thing, there are many activities such as English speech, singing some popular English songs, and communicating foreign teachers, which are helpful and interesting. For another, the most important activity is speaking English with classmates every day. Because of it, our club are well-received by our school students. As far as I’m concerned, we have learnt so many things since set it up. Not only does we improve English speaking skills, but also we become more confident to face the difficulties. In addition, it is a good way to make friends and get knowledge out of class. Thus, we will make it more better. That’s all. Thank you very much. 19分 第一个内容要点有点偏题；语句正确通顺，句式多样，连接词使用恰当 专家评改示范 Boys and girls: It is a great honor for me to represent our club to communicate with you. Now, I’ll share the experiments I’ve got in the activity with you. In the past two month, our club have opened a Eng