2010考高考作文讲评学案试.doc

2010高考作文讲评学案 Part 1 Analysis of the homework 开头：（ 已给出） 第一幅图 On Saturday, I searched for the train ticket about Beidaihe. My grandparents around me and asked the weather and the hotel. and then I went to buy the tickets for them. I searched the informations about Beidaihe on the Internet including the train tick, hotel and whether. On Saturday morning, I got up very early. After breakfast, I surfed the Internet with my grandparents. We wanted to search for some information about the train ticket, the hotel and the weather in Beidaihe. ( 王天元) 第二幅图 Then I helped them to buy two train tickets. On the next day, I went to train ticket office on my own to buy two tickets. There were a lot of people buy the tickets to Beidaihe. But there were so many people, I spend nearly 3 hours to buy it hardly. After doing that, I went to the train station in order to buy the next day’s tickets. There was so many people that I had to spend lots of time waiting, but luckily I succeeded to buy two tickets. （邱昊阳） 第三幅图 I helped their prepared the cloth and the map about Beidaihe and two sunglasses. My grandma gave me a bottle of water and leted me have a rest. …Due to the sunshine in Beidaihe was really strong, I prepared two sunglasses for them. As soon as I got home, I helped my grandparents to prepare the useful things which must be taken with them. Including clothes, shoes, umbrella and the map of Beidaihe. The most important thing were sunny glassed because the sunshine was too heavily. （ 肖强） I helped them prepare their luggage, such as sunglasses, umbrella. I also took a map of Beidaihe so that they could know how to get to the hotel which we booked, also they could go to some interesting places. ( 孙晓晴 ) 第四幅图 The next morning, I sent them to the station and said goodbye to them. They sat in the train with smile and grateful. … we said “goodbye” to each other through the window. And then, the train set out. The next day, they started their trip to Beidaihe. I said goodbye to them in