段落的展开---如何做到论述的具体与充分.pptVIP

段落的展开---如何做到论述的具体和充分 以2011年6月四级作文online shopping为例 范文一 Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology , shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters. Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example , shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand , lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more， the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage. ?In my opinion, shopping on the internet is a irreversible trend. More and more people will be accustomed to it. It will be much more popular in the near future. And at the same time we should take some measures to make it perfect. 具体而充分地展开段落---第1段 Nowadays with the ever rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology , shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters. 在现象陈述中，捎带原因分析（information technology)因果分析法 提及了网购的主要人群，即青少年。举例法 从general 到specific 具体而充分地展开段落---第2段 Online shopping has made our daily life more convenient and comfortable. For example , shopping on the internet can save students a great deal of time on the way between home and store, so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic work. The internet has shorten the distance between manufacturers and consumers and thus we can even buy goods in other countries .On the other hand , lack of the face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. What’ s more， the delivery will increase the risk of items’ damage. 主题句之后，用举例法（学生网购节省时间专注于课业）来充分论述； 自然过渡到第二种具体的网购便利：跨国网购 话题转向网购的不利之处，仍然有二。两者都很简练，但不失具体（没有当面交易的保障，投送过程中的货物损坏） 另，几个关联词使 上