作文模板培训资料.ppt

标　题 ①导入话题　②观点有分歧 ③正方观点　④列出2～3个赞成的理由 ⑤反方观点　⑥列出2～3个反对的理由 ⑦个人观点 [技法尝试应用] 热点命题 (2011·厦门质检)学生考入大学后，是否要立即为其配备笔记本电脑，对此，有人赞同，有人反对。请你根据下列内容，写一篇英语短文，并发表自己的看法。 支持者： 1.是对子女奋发努力取得好成绩的肯定和奖励； 2.方便今后的学习，可随时随地上网查资料。 反对者： 1.势必会给有些家庭增加经济负担； 2.大学里有足够的计算机供学生使用。 注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2．词数120左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university？____________________________________________________ [审题要点] 1．人称：第三人称和第一人称　　2.时态：一般现在时 3．内容要点： ①学生考入大学后，是否要立即配备笔记本电脑。 ②有人支持为大学新生配备笔记本电脑。 ③有人反对为大学新生配备笔记本电脑。 ④表明自己的观点。 自主练笔 ①Is it necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university？②Different people have different ideas. ③Most people are in favour of it.④First of all，freshmen deserve a laptop as an award for their great efforts and achievements.In addition，having a laptop in hand will bring more convenience to their studies and they can have easier access to the Internet，which will in turn benefit them. ⑤However，some people hold opposite opinions. ⑥Their reasons are as follows.First，it will add the financial burden to some families.Besides，many Universities are equipped with adequate computers for use. ⑦Personally speaking，it is unnecessary to buy a laptop for freshmen.They may be addicted to computer games，which will have bad effects on their studies. [写作模式推荐] 1．开头 Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture，we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture... 2．衔接句 As we all know，.../As is known to all，.../It is well know that.../In my opinion，.../As far as I am concerned，.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3．结尾句 In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated.../It is clear that... [技法尝试应用]  热点命题 最近，你和父母回到家乡。你看到了家乡新建的一所学校，发现它与影集中父亲的母校的照片有很大的差别。请你根据下面的一组图画，描述这两所学校的不同情况，并谈谈你的感想。