大学英语四级写作全解pptPPT课件.ppt

要求：请将括号中所给汉语译成英语。 1. Such kind of books, （不像…那么抽象）_________________________________________ those full of technical terms and formulae, can color people’s life and relieve their tension. 【答案】not as/ so abstract as 2. If you are honest to others, （他们也会真诚地对待你，反之亦然）__________________________________. 【答案】 they will treat you sincerely and vice verse * 如果一篇文章只是具有意义上的连贯，而形式上比较松散，就很难突出主题，较好地表达作者的意图。为了能够使文章主题明确、线索明了，而且句式富于变化，句与句之间、段与段之间都需要一定的连接手段。写作中常用的连接手段有： 1. 使用过渡性词语 表示过渡性的词语从功能上分，主要可以分为表转折、表让步、表层进、表举例或列举、表总结、表强调、表比较或对比等连接词语。 表转折：but, however, nevertheless, instead, on the other hand 表让步：although, though, despite, even so, even if/though, regardless of, in spite of 表层进：first, to begin with, furthermore, besides, moreover, in addition, what’s more, last but not least 表举例或列举：for example, for instance, as an illustration, such as 表总结：in summary, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, to conclude, in short, on the whole 表强调: indeed, of course, in particular, above all, most important, in fact 表比较或对比:While, whereas, likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison with, compared with, in the contrary, in the contrast, by contrast 松散到紧凑变换 * 【例】 Walter’s goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies—in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal. * 2. 使用过度性的句子 与段落中句与句之间的连贯一样，一篇文章中各段落之间也需要以一定的方式来明确各段之间的逻辑关系，从而使整篇文章形成一个统一连贯的整体。段与段之间除了借助一些篇章层次上的连接性词语，如however, similarly, therefore, on the other hand, on