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有且只有一个要求：呼应 既要和开头呼应，也要和Body部分呼应 To summarize; In conclusion; Finally; In the end; In a modern society that values instant and automatic, patience has a place.? It is virtuous; it guides you to take the right action in the right moment. Use it to weigh important decisions in your personal life. Make prudent business and investment decisions and save money. Win championships! 单词层面 1. 单词的准度 decide to do / make up one’s mind to do 2. 学习新的单词和新的用法 3. 养成若干好习惯 1)形容词/副词 2)同位语 3)并列结构 4)从句 The decision is unreasonable 5. 练习不同词性之间单词的相互转换 1. 名词和动词的转换 value, mature, favor, expect 2. 动词和形容词 ignore, believe 句式层面 1. 简单句和复合句 2. 修饰语：定语从句，后置定语，句子 the money 3. 分词做状语 Believing that money 4. 反问句 5. 并列结构(排比) 6. 主动语态和被动语态 7. 动名词/不定式/名词性从句做主语 (1)例证可以对比 ?A. 有它与没它结果不同 Victor, handsome, wealthy his friend Jack, gambling, indulge in, bankrupt, left If not, family, happy and whole not in the prison B. 事例可以对比：同一人的不同做法结果不同； 不同人的不同做法结果不同 Victor, wealthy and handsome his friend Jack, indifferent tend to believe on the contrary passionate learn a lot from the coolness and calmness enjoy the serenity with Jack (2)因果推论可以对比: 不同条件可以导出不同结果 李天一 If he were not the son of a famous singer? If he committed the same crime in the USA? in the Iran? If he were above the age of 18? 对比的结构： 1. 整体对比 Body部分两个段落，都要详细叙述 1)表示支持的分论点 (1)支持观点1; (2)支持观点2; (3)支持观点3 2)表示反对的分论点 (1)反对观点1; (2)反对观点2; (3)反对观点3 2.分项对比 Body部分两到三个段落，分别对比 1)开头段 2)支持观点1，反对观点1 3)支持观点2，反对观点2 4)支持观点3，反对观点3 5)总结段 It is of more benefits to live on campus than off the campus since it can do more good to students’ health. 比较1 The first reason I want to put forward is that on campus the meals by professional cooks, which contain a diversity of dishes, are healthier and more balanced, while the food outside school is always limited in a small variety. 比较1的补充 What’s more, opposite to the lack of thorough control over the food security off the campus, which gives rise to a possibility of making people sick, meals in universities are u