大学英语四级作文讲解资料课件.ppt

2.结构上要层次清晰 结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。 分段——文章结构的关键 引言段——扩展段——结尾段 ? 引言段要包含中心句；扩展段每段应有主题；结尾段自然收尾 开头空出相同字符数空格；题目不必重抄；段与段之间不必空行 * 18年 3. 语言上要表达流畅，无重大语病，句式有一定的变化。 1）避免重大的语言错误。每完成一篇作文，应从单词拼写、动词时态、名词单复数、形容词、副词比较级别、固定搭配、介词用法等方面进行检查。 * 18年 4.卷面整洁，安排合理 1.用笔的颜色(深蓝色使人心情放松愉快) 2.粗细(粗线条给人以安全感)， 3.整齐划一的格式(段首一律空两个手指)， 4.明了的段落感(每段空一行)， 5.清晰的字数感(一行以8-10字为宜)， 6.工整干净的卷面（没有黑粑粑， 涂改用短横杠） ?7.作文的排版应该不多于2/3，不少于1/3， 要留有余地，不要将卷面写得密密麻麻。 * 18年 英语四级作文中常用过渡语 * 18年 2分—一塌糊涂 条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. it’s in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in people’s life and increase more knowldeges But some people thought free Adimssions to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited… * 18年 5分—糊里糊涂 基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语言错误。 In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that. The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to the museum life… * 18年 8分—马马虎虎 基本切题。 有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，有一些是严重错误。 There is an interesting and attractive picture which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums. But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums. … * 18年 11分—清清楚楚 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误 Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sense? Free admission to museums helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go