雅思培训课件(Criteria).pptVIP

IELTS Academic Writing  presented by Alice 雅思考试学术类Task1 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Tips for Task 1： 开头不空格、write every second line objectivity （no reason or explanation） tense formal language (无缩写 、避免口语化、美式或英式拼写统一) Criteria - Task Achievement 1. 字数 2. 结构（开头、主体分段、结尾） 3. 数据完整性（趋势-- 起始点、最高、最低 比较-- 极值） Criteria - Coherence and Cohesion Sample: In 1940 the proportion of people aged 65 or more stood at only 5% in Japan, approximately 7% in Sweden and 9% in the US. However, while the figures for the Western countries grew to about 15% in around 1990, the figure for Japan dipped to only 2.5% for much of this period, before rising to almost 5% again at the present time. Criteria - Coherence and Cohesion In spite of some fluctuations in the expected percentages, the proportion of older people will probably continue to increase in the next two decades in the three countries. A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, by which time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries. Criteria - Coherence and Cohesion 1.图表作文连接词 时间 ：since then, after that 对比 ：on the other hand, similarly, in contrast 转折 ：however, instead 让步： in spite of Criteria - Coherence and Cohesion 2.图表作文常用代词 代指单数可数名词或不可数名词： that 代指可数名词复数： those 物主代词 ： its ， their Criteria - Coherence and Cohesion 3. 从句 　定语从句：when, which, that... 时间状语从句：after, before 　让步状语从句：although 　主语从句：常使用在有“将来时间”的图表中, it is v-ed that … Criteria - Coherence and Cohesion 4.　分段或分层 时间先后顺序 (line, bar) 数量大小关系 (pie , bar ) 横向纵向特征 (table) Criteria – Lexical Resource Synonyms for Introduction Synonyms for Introduction * * Synonyms changes show number percentage spending worldwide different from...to about per year