高考英语书面表达专题辅老导-基础写作[论证观点].ppt

(3)大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力, 而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。 (3) The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their inter-personal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets /which may be of great help for them to find a job in the future. (4)考虑到这严重的状况, 我们比以往任何 时候更需要像自行车这样的环保型交通工具。 (4) In view of such a serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycles are more important than any time before. /Having considered this serious situation, we need such environmentally-friendly vehicles as bicycles more than ever before. (5) 通过以上讨论, 我们可以得出如下结论：尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的, 但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents’ desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages. 假设你的朋友John写信告诉你他打算开通网银进行网上购物, 但你并不赞成网上购物, 于是给他写了一封信, 陈述了网上购物的弊端。 1. 浪费钱 (1) 购买不需要的物品 (2)商品可能是伪劣产品 2. 不安全 (1)个人资料容易泄密 (2)银行帐号被盗用 [写作内容] 1. 你对网上购物的看法； 2. 你为何持有这种看法； 3. 建议理智的消费。 [参考范文] You are writing to tell me that you are going to open the online bank service for shopping online but I don’t think it’s a good idea. There is no doubt that it is very convenient for us to have online shopping but the disadvantages of it far outweigh the advantages. First of all, shopping online is a waste of money because buyers tend to be persuaded into buying something they don’t really need. Second, some of the products sold online are probably fake ones due to lack of supervision. What’s worse, nowadays there are also many reports related to online shopping that personal information and even bank accounts are stolen. Therefore, I suggest that you think twice and remain rational when you are shopping online. [精华点评] 根据写作的内容, 本文的结构应该是总～分～总，第一句总起说明作者的观点，而最后一句使用therefore总结作者的观点。范文开篇通过there is no doubt that的句型，采用了先抑后扬的写作手法, 使观点更客观和鲜明。 考生平时注意积累词汇, 如使用了tend to be persuaded into