高中英语作文公开课.ppt

Beautify your sentences(闪亮你的句子） 步骤 1.好句赏析 2.技巧指导 3.巩固提高 Enjoy a song When I was young I________ to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they ______ Id sing along. It _____me smile. Those _____ such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they ________. But theyre back again just like a long lost friend. When I was young I________ (listen) to the radio waiting for my favorite songs. When they ______(play) Id sing along. It ______(make) me smile. Those _____(be) such happy times and not so long ago. How I wondered where they ___________(go). But theyre back again just like a long lost friend. listened played were had gone made 思考： What is a beautiful sentence?  Translation 郭靖是个爷们。他智商不太高。他娶了IQ很高的黄蓉做媳妇。黄是桃花岛集团（THD Group）总裁黄药师的女儿。 Guo Jing is a man. He is not very clever. He married Huan Rong with a very high IQ. Huang is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of TaoHuaDao Group . Guo Jing, a not very intelligent man, married a girl named Huang Rong with an extremely high IQ, who is the daughter of Huangyaoshi,the president of THD Group. Read the followings and make your wise choice! Group 1 A. We have much homework to do . B. We have endless homework to do . C We are burdened with endless homework. Tip 1 高分词汇是首要 高分词汇原则 1.后、高、长（后学的、较高级、较长词汇） good very 2.词组优先 try to do 3.避免重复 A. I like reading while my brother likes watching television. B. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. Group 2 A. This village built a school in 2008. B. Not until 2008 did this village begin to have its own school. Tip 2 陈述不如倒装妙 Eg. 我从来不买日货 A.I will never buy any products made in Japan. B. Never will I buy any products made in Japan. 天空中繁星点点 . In the sky hang little stars. 河岸上有很多花 . On the bank grow lots of flowers. Group 3 A. We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days. B. At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept f