高考英语写作-介绍人物-高二.ppt

最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装），用英语为班级黑板报写一篇100～120词的短文。 你的文章应包括下列要点： 1. 李越的事迹及其对同学的影响； 2. 你的评论。 注意: 1. 文章的标题和开头已给出（不计入总词数）。 2. 参考词汇: singing contest 歌咏比赛costume服装 Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. ________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题谋篇】 人称：第三人称 时态：用一般过去时和一般现在时 结构： 李越的事迹及其对同学们的影响 2. 你的评价 【写作关键】 1. 在上周六下午，李越不顾天气炎热，到一家家商店为我们选购歌咏比赛的服装。 ①在上周六炎热的下午 on the hot afternoon of last Saturday ②从一家商店到另一家商店 from one store to another ③在演唱会上 in the singing contest 2. 然而其他的人在舒适的教室里享受他们的业余时间。 ①享受业余时间 enjoy the leisure time ②在凉爽舒适的教室里 in the cool and comfortable rooms 3. 被她的努力深深地感动了，我们尽我们最大的努力在比赛中获得了一等奖。 ①被她的努力深深地感动了 deeply moved by her efforts ②尽我们最大的努力 try our best ③获得一等奖 win the first prize 4. 此外，她经常利用业余时间帮助他人。 ①此外 besides/in addition/What’s more ②在业余时间里 in one’s spare time ③利用她的业余时间帮助他人 devote her spare time to helping others 5. 因此，她应该得到这个荣誉，我们应该向她学习。 ①因此 therefore ②应该得到这个荣誉 deserve the honor ③向她学习 learn from her 【连句成篇】 Star Student of the Week Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example to us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her. Ⅰ. 人物介绍属于记叙文