英语记叙文写作教学课件.ppt

I. ContextWriters should, at the beginning (the first para.), provide the reader with a context or circumstances including 例文– A traffic accident 首段：首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind. 例文– A traffic accident 中心段：交待细节，注重在how; 交待细节时应注意的事项？ 过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。 中心段细节描写练习 请找出下文与主题无关的细节 An accident This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents. After I got out there I decided to take a short drive. I drove down to East Greenwich, which is about eight miles from Centreville. While coming home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two. When I had gone about half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me. On coming near to where the sound came from, I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train. Fortunately no one was seriously hurt, although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life before. The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled, as the cow-catcher was broken and the head-light and the smoke-stack were knocked off. No one seemed to know the cause of the accident. 例文– A traffic accident中心段赏析 It was about 7:00 on Friday morning, (Oct. 31st).（补充说明时间）I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car. （事情的起因）I saw a man knocked down by a black car. Soon many cars were jammed there. I got there and found that beside a black Benz lay a middle-aged man in a pool of blood. （交代一些细节）The street turned chaotic.（事情的大致经过）After a moment, the police and an ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（事情的结果） 例文– A traffic accident结尾段赏析 结尾段：可适当发表一点议论 　　　In my opinion, the pedestrian should have taken the overpass when crossing the street. Besides, the driver might have driven too fast, regardless of such bad weather. Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided if we become aware of the im