高级英语写作课程教案.doc

PAGE PAGE 18 高级英语写作课程 Advanced English Writing Introductory to the Course 课程介绍 This course is intended to make students understand the required methods in the advanced writings. After the course, students should be able to freely express their ideas and thoughts with idiomatic English expressions in the writings, not Chinese-English. The course will be divided into two major parts: Basic Requirement of Advanced English Writing and Practical Writing (应用文) 【 说明 】★ ★ Differences between written language and spoken language. They are both the way of communications. Spoken: understand each other immediately, possible language errors, mispronunciations, etc. Written: grammar/ spelling mistakes not allowed, etc. ★在第一次课后，征询学生意见：“你希望在写作课程中学到什么”或“你希望老师讲些什么” Section I Basic requirement of advanced English writing 该部分的前提是，已经具有一定的写作基础，能写出正确的、合乎英语语法的句子。因此，不再讲语法和“正确的句子”，而重点在“写出更好的句子”。 I. Sentence Level 1．Diction (措词) Using exact words （用词的准确性） 例1： 他走进了教室。 The usual way may be: He walked(moved ) into the classroom. 【 说明 】 一般的动作“走”，仅区别于 “跑”、“飞”，或者 “by bus”、“on bike” 等。 更有不同姿势、不同心情的情况下的 走，用词就不一样了。 如： 悠闲地走：stroke 快步地走：rush, etc. 蹦蹦跳跳地走： spring 步伐大而有力地走：bound 腾空跳着走：leap 跛脚走：limp 【 说明 】 （可做不同的动作来演示下例词的不同表达） The better way may be; He rushed into the classroom. Other possible words: dashed; stole; stalked（昂首阔步地走；悄悄地追踪）; etc. 【 说明 】 可用小短片显示 （布什拉登；备用影像No. 1)； 【 说明 】 使用不同的词，使语句表达得更生动、形象。比walk 好。 例2： （郎文联想词典中的例句）（图 加 文） Example 1 (熨衣服) She burned the shirt. She scorched the shirt. Scorch: to burn the surface of something and leave a dark mark on it. （烧坏了某物的表面） Example 2 (乱涂写) She is drawing things while she is on the telephone. She’s not really thinking about what she’s doing. She’s doodling on the paper. Doodle: to draw shapes, lines, or patterns without really thinking about what you are doing, for example when you are thinking about something else or when you feel bored. （胡乱涂画、写） e.g. I always doodle while I’m ta