杭州学军中学高三英语写作指导.ppt

We can imagine the beautiful sur- roundings. There are many trees along the streets. There is a clean river in the city. There are many fishes in the river. There are willow trees on the one side. There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. There are many flowers on them. 七单短句：呆板、跳跃、颠簸、割裂 Can you rewrite to improve it? Just imagine the beautiful surround- ings if we make our cities greener. Green trees line the streets. A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound. On the one side stand rows of willow trees. On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers. (三长 + 两短， 句式灵活，抑扬顿挫， 流畅自然，生动活泼) 句式变化四：利用倒装结构 　　颠倒基本句子结构而使用倒装句，既可以丰富语句 的句式，也能突出被倒装的部分，使文章句式多样、异 彩纷呈。 　　In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games. 　　Faith in the Chinese economic reforms the majority of people will never lose. 学生习作 　　So vital is the awareness of safety that I cannot emphasize too much. As we know, a good know- ledge of safety is often closely related to our happy life. 　Here are some tips we should bear in mind. Most importantly, we’re supposed to pay full attention to our personal safety at school. Besides, when con- flicts come up between classmates, it’s rational for us to keep calm and clear. Only in this way can we avoid any unexpected safety problems. 　　Now that safety is something that can’t be neglected, it’s high time that all the teachers and students tried to turn the “School Safety Week” activity into real action step by step. 　　Hope the flowers of safety blossom in every corner of our school. 2013年高考作文写什么？？ 2012高考考试说明英语样卷 2012年杭州第二次教学检查（二模） Don’t Be Self-centered in a Class As is shown in the picture above, a helicopter is going to put the letter “I” into the word “Team”. But if so, the word will no longer exist. This picture conveys the message that if team members