雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson 6.ppt

TASK I The figure show data for a flu epidemic which hit a large country town in 1996. Figure 1 gives the number of persons who died and Figure 2 gives the number of cases of flu before and during the epidemic. In Figure 1 it can be seen that the flu was responsible for the deaths of 2 females but no males in the period from March to May. However, from June to August, there were 4 female deaths and 1 male death. From Figure 2 it is clear that the new vaccine had a positive effect on the number of new cases of flu reported in females. There were just over 1000 cases reported in May, climbing rapidly to a peak of 3500 in July. Thereafter, the number of cases dropped slowly to about 2800 in September, before leveling off at 2500 for the rest of the year. For males, the figures were lower but showed a similar trend throughout the epidemic. * 不分类成流水账 * P55 练习 IELTS WRITING Lesson Nine: 小作文2 饼状图 Pie Chart的审题过程： 1. 看文字信息 2. 标题审题 标1\2\3 3. 极端数据及其周围（与之接近）数据 4. 一般数据 5. 落单数据 TASK I 1. 每个饼块在两个饼中排名第？占？% 2. 分类说：左饼到右饼 上升/下降/保持不变 3. 每段中具体描写每个饼块，突出特点 4. 写完要素后将两个饼的数量比较一下 *若两个饼的总量有不同，需要交代一下 5. 学会丰富百分比的表达和“占”的表达。不要一直用数字加百分比的格式，如25%。特定的数字可以采取多样性的表达，如25%=a quarter of, 50%=half of, 50%=a, or the majority of TASK I:两个饼 TASK I “占据”的讲法：A占了数据的百分比 occupy constitute make up the rest the remainder TASK I A占了数据的百分比 THERE BE 数据做主语 The percentage of… is …%. 饼图的三句万能句型: 1. 数据+抄题+导入宾语 Band 5 2. 主语+“占据”（先特征，后数据） Band 6 3. 剩余数据 Band 7 解决方案： 1. 把相同的属性的柱状用线条勾画出来。以线状图或者是饼状图的方法来写。 2. 完成两维分析。 TASK I:柱状图 1. 将相同属性的柱子顶端连接起来 2. 若横坐标是数字轴或时间轴，按曲线图写，否则按饼状图写法写 P63 TASK I: 柱状图 The graph shows the changing patterns in commuting by train, car, tube or bus for commuters in London in the years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The number of people using trains at first rose from just under 20% in 1960 to about 28% in 1980, but then fell back to ab