江苏省高考英语一轮复习第23讲-书面表达写作技巧指导(一)课件.pptVIP

* * * * * * * * Writing a composition is just like making a sandwich. 写作的“五项基本原则” 一、 长 短 句原则 二、 主 题句原则 三、 一 二 三原则1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐俗）4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（推荐）6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）8）most important of all, moreover, finally9）on the one hand, on the other hand（两点的情况）10）for one thing, for another（适用于两点情况） 四、 短语优先原则 五、 多实少虚原则 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下结构： 倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语 With 复合结构 Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular. But I think that it’s better to help other people. We know that it’s important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because you’ve helped them and you’ll be happy… Improve this composition, try! (1) Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways. (2) Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives will come to the party.（用where定语从句）(3) They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes.（合并句子）(4) Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is becoming very popular （用which定语从句）. (5) But (替换） I think （替换） that it’s better to help other people.(6) We know that it’s important to learn to help others. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. (7) People will help you in return and you’ll be happy （用For one thing, For another 替换）. Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways. Usually, a party is held where best friends as well as relatives can get together and have fun. They usu