今昔对比类作文公开课.pptVIP

基础写作：今昔对比类 高二 张敏 Teaching aims: Enable students to know how to write this kind of writing Get students to learn the words, phrases and sentences of the writing Improve students’ cooperation and teamwork Step1. please enjoy some pictures How many buildings are there? the first teaching building only four buildings Please look at the road the administration building teaching buildings, our beautiful school So beautiful ! our library dormitory area/building the playground Indoor Stadium Step2. Before writing 1. 今昔对比类作文的时态和一般的写作格式： 在“今昔对比”的对比类写作中，一定要把握时态的运用，时态通常是一般现在时和一般过去时。写作格式：提出主题句——对过去情况的描述——对现在情况的描述——总结句(视情况而定)。 2. 今昔对比类作文的开头一般可以采用哪些典型句式和词汇？ 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years.Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since…（自从…以来，事情有了好转/改善）Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. 2. 对比常用句型: (1)…used to…, but now… 过去常……，但是现在……(2) …in the past, but now… 在过去……，但是现在……(3) once…, but now… 曾经…….，但是现在……(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了 Step3. Discuss with your partners 请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇以“Changes in our school”为题的短文。 五年前 现在 大约1000个师生 全校师生超过4500个 只有四栋教学楼 共十六栋建筑物，比如行政楼（administration building）、图书馆、体育馆、学生宿舍和教师公寓等 没有操场 八个篮球场(basketball court)，一个大型操场 几乎没有绿色植物 校园里到处都是花草树木，非常漂亮！ Step4. Show your writing Step5. Draw a conclusion Homework: 过去五十年，西藏发生了翻天覆地的变化，请以“Changes in Tibet”为题，写写西藏的变化。 昔（旧西藏） 今（新西藏） 行（交通方式） 没有公路 可以享受便利交通 住（居住条件） 没有自己的住房 住宽敞舒适的房子 教育 只有2%的孩子能上学 98.2%的孩子有机会上学 【写作要求】 只能使用五个句子表达全部内容 Changes in Tibet Great changes have taken place in Tibet in the past fifty years. There was no road in the past, but now the people in Tibet can enjoy convenient transportation. Once, people there didn’t have their own houses, but now they can liv