高考英语写作公开课.pptVIP

Learning Aims 1.Learn to write an outline composition. 2.Develop a good writing habit — analyze — organize — polish. 3.Develop the abilities to solving the outline composition writing, the proof and the rational cloze. How to write a composition Six steps to write a composition ① Analyzing the task ②Finding out the main points ③Thinking of key points/phrases ④Forming sentences ⑤Combining the sentences into a passage ⑥Copying normally 假如你叫李华,你校同学正在就“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”这一主题展开讨论,请根据下面所给的信息,给某英文报社写一封 信,介绍讨论情况,并谈谈你的看法。 【审题——抓准信息· 快速推断】 【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】 第1段：点明话题—高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼【引入6分】【信息】我给你写信谈谈在我们学校的一个热点话题,那就是, 高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼。 【遣词造句】 普通表达:I will tell you about a discussion. Should students of Senior 3 take physical exercise? 高级表达:利用进行时态、非谓语动词、连接短语等。 I’m ___________ you about a ______discussion among us students in our school,________, whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise. 第2段：提出一种观点并具体阐述理由【作文重点12】 【信息】有55%的同学赞成参加体育锻炼。 【运用】55%的同学认为我们应该每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。 【遣词造句】 普通表达:55% of the students think that we should take physical exercise every day. We should do morning exercise. We should play table tennis or basketball. 高级表达:利用同位语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等。 55% of the students hold the view that we should _____________________ every day, such as , ____________________,playing table tennis or basketball. 【信息】赞成的同学认为参加体育锻炼有很多好处。 【运用2】锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病。锻炼能使 大脑得到休息；使学习效果更好。 【遣词造句】 普通表达：It can build our body. It can reduce illnesses. It can make us have a rest. We will have a better learning effect. 高级表达：利用并列句、非谓语动词和高级词汇等。It can build_______________ illnesses, __________________(同时), it can _________________(make sb adj) a better learning effect. 第3段：提出另一种观点，并具体阐述理由 【信息】 ：锻炼浪费时间。 【运用2】：45%学生持反对意见，他们认为锻炼浪费时间。 【遣词造句】 普通表达：However，45% of the students don’t support that. They think that they should not take physical exercise. It is a waste of time. 高级表达:利用定语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等　　　　　　　　However, 45% of the students are against that ，　_______ complain