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Para 2 Topic Sentence: “One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to draw things in perspective.” Information about perspective: Put forward: Masaccio; 1428 Content: “…looking through a hole in a wall at a real scene.” Assistance: “By coincidence, oil paints were also developed …” Step 4. Make an outline of the passage Para 1 Topic Sentence: Idea 1: Idea 2: Para 2 Topic Sentence: Information about perspective: Put forward: Content: Assistance: Step 5. Write the first draft Para 1 Topic Sentence: During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages. Rewrite: In the Renaissance, new viewpoints were in place of those hundreds years ago. viewpoints new ideas and values were in place of hundreds years ago replaced held in the Middle Ages 同义转换 Idea 1: People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life. Rewrite： Firstly, people focused more on humanistic themes rather than religious ones. Idea 2: At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ideas about art. They tried to paint people and nature as they really were. Rewrite： Secondly, painters returned to classical ideas, which attached great importance to real people and nature. focused more on 同义转换 句型转变 短语连接 删除细节 Para 1 In the Renaissance, new viewpoints were in place of those hundreds years ago. Firstly, people focused more on humanistic themes rather than religious ones. Secondly, painters returned to classical ideas which focused on real people and nature. (38 words) Step 6. Revise the Summary People had new viewpoints during the Renaissance. Meanwhile, painters preferred the classical ideas and painted real people and nature. People had new viewpoints during the Renaissance. People focused more on humanistic themes rather than religious ones. Meanwhile, painters preferred the classical ideas and painted real people and