雅思作文第一次课.ppt

雅思作文第一次课 吴宏化 Apollo 考试时间 周六/ 周四 上午9点开始 雅思笔试考试流程 听力 30分钟+10分钟 誊写答案 阅读60分钟 写作60分钟 雅思作文考试形式 Task 1 图标作文 20分钟 150字 Task2 议论文 40分钟 250字 共计：60 分钟 400字 曲线图 饼图 表格图 柱形图 流程图 地图图 大作文常见题型类别 1Some people think that teenagers’ use of the Internet should be limited. Others feel that the Internet is an academic resource that they should have free access to, in order to do things such as homework and projects. Discuss both views and give your opinion organization 第一段Introduction 第二段 internet should be limited 第三段 internet should not be limited 第四段conclusion 2 Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition? organization 第一段Introduction 第二段Advantages of private tuition （ ad1, 2, 3) 第三段Disadvantages of private tuition (disadv 1,2,3) 第四段Conclusion 3 In many countries, workers over 60 can still be found in the workplace. However, some people think it may cause some social problems and they should get retired. To what extent do you agree or disagree? organization Introduction The explanation of why people retire at 60 The explanation of why people should not retire at 60 Conclusion 5 Traffic congestion seems to be increasing. What do you think are the causes of traffic congestion and what, if anything, can be done to reduce the problems? 作文评分 Examiner Task 1 and 2 : 0 - 9 Writing Band T1 * 1 / 3 + T2 * 2 / 3 Overall Band 中国大陆考区作文平均成绩 07年 5.12 08年 5.23 09年 5.11 2010中国大陆雅思平均成绩 total: 5.6 Listening 5.7 Reading 5.9 Writing 5.2 Speaking 5.3 40个国家里面倒数第四 评分标准 TR/TA task response/achievement CC coherence and cohesion LR lexical resource GRA grammatical range and accuracy Task response 任务回应 1 underlength 2 off-topic 3 response to the question BAND7 address all parts of the task presents a clear position throughout the response Presents, extends and