雅思写作赏析2+写作评分法则.ppt

雅思高分范文赏析+背诵 高分作文三部曲 1.熟读中英文互译 2.研读并划出有用的写作词汇句型等 3.段落背诵 topic: 你认为为什么要上大学？ why do you think people attend college or university? 1.独立思考,列出提纲(论点和论据) 2.同伴讨论,完善提纲 3. 中译英 (写作练习) 4.背诵范文 (第2段) (people attend college or university for many different reasons—new experience; career preparation; increased knowledge) 1.教育类 中译英 （破题段） ①大学是一个让学生获得更多新知识和新经验的地方. 当然,不同的人上大学有不同的原因: 有些人想在大学深造, 有些人想找一份好工作,还有一些人希望通过大学学习改变他们目前的状况. 在我看来,对大学学习最好的定义就是一个人对未来生活做的准备。(注意避免中文式英文) ① College is a place where students can gain more new knowledge and experience. Of course, different people have varied reasons for attending college: some may want to further their study in college; some hope to find a decent job while others wish to change their present situation through studying in college. From my perspective, college study can be best defined as a preparation for one’s future life or career. ② Firstly, students can obtain new knowledge and experience from studying in college. Teachers and professors in college who possess(拥有) not only abundant professional knowledge(丰富的专业的知识) but also plentiful of teaching experience will supply students with new knowledge and direct(指引) them to solve problems in reality(在现实中). With their help, students can be equipped with knowledge(用知识武装起来) in a specific area, which will pave the road for(铺平道路) their future career. ③ Secondly, students can learn how to arrange time efficiently. Before studying in college, their life may often be arranged by their parents, and their study by teachers. It is very different for them to live and study in college, because they will have to settle their life and study by themselves. They have to decide things such as when to get up, when to play and when to finish their assignment, etc. This experience is of great importance for their work and life ahead. ④ Thirdly, studying in college gives students an opportunity to live with others and lea