托福写作：如何展示你的论据.docx

智课网TOEFL备考资料 托福写作：如何展示你的论据 摘要: 托福写作：如何展示你的论据 新托福写作分综合写作和独立写作两大块。独立写作对于考生来说已经很熟悉了，但是综合写作就不同，它要求考生要读要听还要再写，因此，考生对于托福写作      新托福写作分综合写作和独立写作两大块。独立写作对于考生来说已经很熟悉了，但是综合写作就不同，它要求考生要读要听还要再写，因此，考生对于托福写作业开始有了畏惧。其实，在任何托福写作中，通常都是遵循introduction- body-conclusion(引言段-主体段-结论段)这个架构的。文章的主体是整个文章得高分的一个关键，因为对于大多数考生，作文的开头结尾都已经有了自己的套路，唯一不同的就是在论证观点时的论据上的充分与否和表达恰当与否。一般来说，一篇议论文必须包含至少两个主体段。每个主体段都必须有明确的主题句“topic sentence”和若干支持句“supporting sentences”。他们共同组成文章的理由段，对全文的论点提供理由支持。初学者在练习议论文写作时，必须遵循理由段发展的几个简单原则，这对迅速完成理由段、构建连贯和理由充分的议论文大有帮助。这几个简单原则包括：  托福写作论据发展原则一：  Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written， revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences.  (每个主体段都必须有一个明确的主题句)  托福写作论据发展原则二：  Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence.  (支持句必须围绕主题句展开)  例子：  Hobbies are important for many reasons. First， a hobby can be educational. For example， if the hobby is stamp collecting， the person can learn about the countries of the world and even some of their history. Second， engaging in a hobby can lead to meeting other people with the same interests. A person can also meet other people by going to the school. Third， a persons free time is being used in a positive way. The person has no time to be bored or get into mischief while engaged in the hobby. Finally， some hobbies can lead to a future job. A person who enjoys a hobby-related job is more satisfied with life.  分析：  这段话的topic sentence很明显-“Hobbies are important for many reasons”，之后的支持句从三方面阐述hobby的重要性(first， second， third)，但段中这句话A per