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读后续写微技能---“展示而非讲述”策略赵寅莹 Later that evening, after supper ,Private Smith and his wife went outside. They felt peaceful and sweet. Later that evening, after supper ,Private Smith and his wife went outside. The moon was bright, above the eastern hills. Sweet , peaceful stars filled the sky as the night birds sang softly , and tiny insects buzzed in the soft air. （1）聚焦不同感官（Focus on different senses） 学生习作[Tell] I love listening to music. [Show]?I love listening to deafening rock and roll music （听觉） flowing out of the CD player as dazzling lights are turned on and off constantly （视觉）. My body can’t help dancing to the music as if I were flying above the clouds. （感觉） how？ 学生习作[Tell] Nature was calm and peaceful. [Show] It was the cool, gray （视觉） dawn, and there was a delicious （ 嗅觉） sense of rest and peace in the deep, spreading calmness and silence of the woods. Not a leaf moved （视觉）; not a sound disturbed great Natures deep thought （听觉）. Practice1 [Tell] Craig felt light-hearted and skated faster and faster. [Show] _____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ Craig felt the wind touching his face merrily with brilliant sparkle in his eyes and he felt as if he were flying like a bird. （2）聚焦面部、身体和声音（Focus on face, body and voice） 4 [Tell] She was angry. [Show] “Ill never believe you again!”she barked at him （声音）,her whole body shaking like a leaf （身体）. Salty and bitter tears streamed down her pale cheeks to her swollen and dry lips （面部）.   学生习作 [Tell] Jim was acting a little suspiciously.（引起怀疑的） [Show] Jim immediately slammed the drawer. I saw him slip something behind his back （身体）. He then forced a smile （面部）, and said hoarsely, “Hi. I wasnt — I didnt expect you back so soon.”（声音）  Practice2 [Tell] Craig was afraid to move forward. _______________________________________________ ________________________________________________ His feet__________, Craig t