9.19调研课动词在续写中的具象化表达(1).ppt

* * * * * 动词在读后续写中的具象化表达 StudentA:Im waiting for the result anxiously. StudentB:Waiting anxiously for the result,I lowered my head,and buried my face in books with my palms sweating. Verbs Lets compare. Scene1: Miss Xia felt his depression and comforted him. Part1:Verbs+scene description Miss Xia embraced him, patted his back and whispered, “Dont lose heart.” Step1:分解动作，调动全身感官 Step2:添加形容词或副词 Step3:添加非谓语动词 Miss Xia embraced him tightly, patted his back gently and whispered, “Dont lose heart.” Feeling his depression,Miss Xia embraced him tightly and patted his back gently, whispering, “Dont lose heart.” Lets learn. Step4:独立主格结构, with复合结构,介词短语, 倒装结构,事物作主语等 请分解fight这个动作 . . . . Scared as he was ,Mac still lifted the stick, paced back and forth to wait the slim chance and abruptly hit the wolf with full strength,the wolf limping away reluctantly. 动词 副词 介词短语 独立主格 Scene2: Mac fought bravely with the wolf and scared it away. 倒装 请分解overcome,climb两个动作 . . . . . Jane staggered through the muddy path,crawled up the slippery slope with hands and knees,and finally she topped an open upland,waving her yellow blouse at the helicopter with her last bit of strength. 动词 形容词 介词短语 Scene3: Jane overcame many difficulties along th