图画英语作文模板.doc

1.图画型 第一段：套话+图片描述+套话 What the drawing is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! （并列押韵，可以说是有用的废话）Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them having only one leg , are running forward together. （妙在featured和who，插入的独立主格结构。这句话是得分重点，需要自己组织一个简单的切题的句子。）However ridiculous and humorous（押韵） it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather significant implications . （可以认为是有用的废话.） 第二段：主题句+深入阐述+分条阐述+分条阐述 1、Evidently , the purpose of the illustration is to mirror the fact that teamwork （中心词）is essential to achieving success .（第一句，这是揭示主题的句子，大家的句型百变不离其宗。也是得分重点.）2、Indeed, a great deal of attention is being paid today to （这个句型是某年阅读理解的第一句）cooperation , which has profound implications for both individual and whole society .（第二句，这是一个长句子，同时也是一个概括句，改卷老师看到你思路清晰。） 3、First and foremost ,in this world of change and complexity, the need for teamwork is of the greatest importance , if one want to realize dreams . (第三句，分述)4、In addition , our country as a whole also could not afford to part with（这个句型是我从某年阅读理解里借用过来的） teamwork spirit，if we are ever （这个单词可以不要，不过我看到真题里有这个用法，单词简单，但是用法深奥，应该是比较地道的英语。我想改卷老师一定很喜欢。）going to move forward in terms of politics , economy , culture and society .（第四句，分述） 第三段：评论 Teamwork spirit ,in my view , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society .（此句是插入+并列） Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of teamwork spirit .（转折句，是我从徐绽的作文书里总结归纳的。）Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run ! （强调句，高联的辅导班讲过这个句型，强调+并列+插入）