高中英语作文技巧.pptxVIP

;Bad sample;progress;词汇,句型 , 语法多样化;;;;影响给分的因素之二： 　　　　　　　文中所采用的语言材料;1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (幸亏…) 2. I think you’d better ask what you don’t understand. 3. Lu xun is not only a writer, but also a thinker. ;B. 句型结构运用灵活多变,增加文章的魅力;In order to my parents, I should make full use of every minute to study what my teacher taught. 2) 我很乐意和你分享我是怎样学英语的 I’ m glad to share with you how I learn English. I ’ m glad to share with you the way _______ I learn English ;E.恰当使用特殊句式，增强语句表现力;影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅; and, also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition…;If you are the teacher 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据下列要点写回信。 要点: 1. 我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了一些进步； 2. 但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法； 3. 今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用流利的英语和你写信； 4. 我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化； 5. 如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的家乡。; ; ;the illegal buildings taken up blocked the traffic out of date breaks the beauty of the city exists some hidden dangers;影响书面表达得分的因素：;3. If you get to China that have time, me with you look my hometown. 4. I will welcome to you. ◆“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错误、冠词介词使用不准确等方面,如： Under my teacher and classmates all help to me ,……. ;;;◆ 审题不认真，要点有所遗漏;;One possible version: June 8, 2008  Dear Peter, Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made some progress in English. However I still find English hard to learn, such as some difficult idioms which made me confused. No matter how hard it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.; Not long ago I returned to my hometown and found great changes had taken place there. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened. My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to come to China