高考英语应用文书写--评分标准解读--要点+细节+交际.doc

应用文书写 目前存在问题： 我不知道如何“凑”够字数 对比参考范文，我依然不知道自己的作文能得多少分 我不知道如何利用老师提供的范文 书信写作部分所得分数与所用时间不成正比 书信写作评分中的“档” 满分15分： 一档（13-15分）：二档（9-12）：三档（4-8）：四档（1-3） 聚焦“一档文” 一档（13-15分）： 内容完整，条例清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际的需求；体现出比较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。 书信写作评分“四要素” 内容完整；语言准确；调理清晰；交际得体 书信写作评分的“两抓手”与“三步走” “两抓手”：内容+语言 “三步走”：是否及格（要点齐全）；定档（内容+语言）；给分 内容：要点，细节，交际性表达 语言： 二档文（9-12分） Dear Jim There are many famous people in the Chinese history. Of all these famous people, I like Lu Xun the best. Lu Xun was a famous poet during the history who made a large contribution to the Chinese people. First, he wrote many passages to teach people. Then, he made the people begin to know the world. Finally, his book taught people a lot.(三个细节看似一个) gain/acquire He taught me that we should learn knowledge to protect ourselves. And we need to study I like Lu Xun Yours Li Hua 要点齐全，细节没有太多条理，交际性句型没有，语言简单，没有大的语言错误。 三档文（4-8） Dear Jim I have received your letter recently, now I will answer your question in the letter, tell you, one of my favorite person. I like Zhuge Liang best. In my mind, he was clever and friendly. He was try his best to help Liu Bei, who is the president of Shu. He was a friendly person. He cared about everyone around him. And he can do everything best by himself, if don t have him, Shu must dead as early as possible. I was learn more about him. As try my best to help someone, keep mind clever, friendly to everyone. I know you were interested in Chinese history. I think Zhuge Liang is the best. What do you think? I was very glad to talk with you. Looking forward to your reply Yours， Li Hua 要点貌似齐全，语言质量太差。开头结尾句型通顺，为背诵句型，考场上分本没有反映出真实的语言能力。 考场满分文 How have you been? I am excited about your interest in Chinese history. Here I would like to introduce Li Bai, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty to you. As you know, Li Bai wrote about 2000 poems in his life, most of which were written about beautiful scenery of his beloved country. His poems had an im