高考英语 规范组合提分练1 短文改错＋书面表达(投诉信).docVIP

考前顶层设计 英语 PAGE PAGE 3 规范组合提分练1　短文改错＋书面表达(投诉信) 时间：30分钟　满分：35分 短文改错　(2017·潍坊二模)　体裁：应用文　话题：日常生活　难度：★★★☆☆ Dear Sir/Madam， I have received the sneakers that I buy from your online shop. With the excitement, I unwrapped the package but found something wrong with them. So Im writing to inform you the problems. First, the colour of the sneakers that I want are red instead of black. Second, size 41 is too large for them. That annoys me most is that there are several little stain on one of the sneakers. They really look awfully. If putting in my situation, how would you feel? Id like you to change this pair for a new one and give me the money back. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely， Lin Ming 答案与解析　 Dear Sir/Madam， I have received the sneakers that I eq \o(buy,\s\do14(①bought)) from your online shop. With eq \o( eq \o(the,＼) ,\s\do14(②)) excitement, I unwrapped the package but found something wrong with them. So Im writing to inform youeq \o(∧,\s\do14(③of/about)) the problems. First, the colour of the sneakers that I want eq \o(are,\s\do14(④is)) red instead of black. Second, size 41 is too large for eq \o(them.,\s\do14(⑤me)) eq \o(That,\s\do14(⑥What)) annoys me most is that there are several little eq \o(stain,\s\do14(⑦stains)) on one of the sneakers. They really look eq \o(awfully.,\s\do14(⑧awful)) If eq \o(putting,\s\do14(⑨put)) in my situation, how would you feel? Id like you to change this pair for a new one eq \o(and,\s\do14(⑩or)) give me the money back. Looking forward to your early reply. Your sincerely， Lin Ming ①buy→bought　考查动词时态。根据语境可知买鞋子发生在过去，应用一般过去时，故buy改为bought。 ②去掉the　考查冠词。with_excitement“兴奋地”。 ③you后加of/about　考查固定用法。 inform_sb._of/_about_sth.“通知某人某事”。 ④are→is　考查主谓一致。本句主语是the colour，故谓语动词用单数形式。 ⑤them→me　考查代词。根据语境可知鞋子是买给自己的，应用代词me。 ⑥That→What　考查名词性从句。what 引导主语从句且在从句中作主语。 ⑦stain→stains　考查名词的数。根据可数名词stain前的several可知，stain应用复数形式。 ⑧awfully→awful　考查形容词。look 是系动词，其后应接形容词作表语，故awfully改为awful。 ⑨putting→put　考查非谓语动词。put与you是逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作状语。 ⑩and→or