高中英语_How to make a good writing教学课件设计.ppt

Teaching aims: 1. Enable students to master five steps for wrinting a composition. 2. Be able to writing compositions using the skills learned in this class. 1.他的梦想是当一名老师。 2.他考入北京大学。 3.他总是第一个来最后一个走的学生。 He was enrolled into Beijing University. He was admitted into Beijing University. His dream is to be/become a teacher. He dreams of becoming/being a teacher. He is always the first student to come and the last one to leave. 4.杨利伟是第一位登上月球的中国人。 5.有志者事竟成。 Yang Liwei is the first Chinese to land on the moon/who landed on the moon. Where there is a will, there is a way. 1.汉式英语 错误：That factory broke out a fire last Sunday. 正确：A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday. 英语写作中常见错误： 2.句子结构不完整或结构错误 错误：The woman talked to you just now is our English teacher. 正确：The woman who/that talked to you just now is our English teacher. 3. 重复累赘错误：We hope to improve our work better.正确：We hope to improve our work. 4.语法、词法错误 错误： In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 正确：In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 5.拼写错误及标点符号错误If it is convinent to you , please come to see me.If it is convenient to you , please come to see me. How do you do the writing? 1. 审题：确定文体，人称和时态； 2. 整合信息：把所有信息整合成不超过10句话，并考虑可否自由发挥； 3. 翻译句子：考虑语法结构； 4. 连句成篇: 巧用连词 5.检查：pants 原则 How to correct？ pants 纠错原则：1）pattern；2）agreement；3）number； 4）tense; 5) spelling. According to the pants rule ，you find out some faults from the following passage. 根据pants 原则，请进行短文改错 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2016. I was walking along Park road towards the east while an elderly man come out of the park across the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and making a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit a old man.He fell with a cry because he was serious injured.The car didn’t stop and drove off at a great speed.I noticed the driver who was a young woman and the plate number wasAC 864.About two minutes later I stoped a car and took