人教版初中九年级英语第十单元：科普知识和现代技术.ppt

?写作模板? ?范文点评 　　①My invention is a flying bike. ②The flying bike is very cool and modern with two wheels and a pair of wings. You can ride it on the ground or fly in the air. Besides, when youre using the flying bike, you can not only take pictures of the beautiful scenery outside, but also communicate with other people. ③There are many advantages of the flying bike. Firstly, its high speed can help you reach anywhere you like efficiently. Secondly, with solar power as its energy, it doesnt cause pollution. Therefore, it is help-ful to protect the environment. ④However, Ill improve the flying bike in order to make it more helpful. In my opinion, the flying bike should be lighter in weight so that people could carry it conveniently. ⑤In conclusion, the flying bike will be of great benefit. I believe itll be very popular in the future. ①开头点出本文的写作目的,引入“发明”这一话题。 ②介绍发明的外形和用途。使用连接词语来使文章连贯。 ③本段着重介绍发明的优势特点。采用次序词分点描述,语言清晰。 ④本段浅谈对于发明的改进。采用连接短语表示改进的目的。 ⑤本段总结,并对前景表达美好的意愿。 (四)考场作文练笔 (原创题)网络是20世纪的重要发明之一,并已成为我们生活中必不可缺的一部分。有了网络,我们可以足不出户做很多事情。请你结合亲身经历,谈一谈你对网络的看法,并谈谈青少年应如何正确使用网络。 要求:1.词数80左右;2.不得出现真实的人名、校名。 　　The Internet is one of the greatest inventions of the age. No one can even live without it now because it really has had a great influence on everyones life. There are many experiences that the Internet brought me convenience and one of them is the most unforgettable. Last year, one friend of my mothers, Aunt Mary, was seriously ill and she needed to go to a doctor in Beijing. Unluckily, she lived far from the train station and couldnt get a train ticket. When I heard about that, I promised to help her at once by buying a ticket online with my mobile phone. Just within ten minutes, I got the job done. Aunt Mary was quite happy that she could go to Beijing and my mom was so proud of me. Although the Internet has been an irreplaceable part of our life, we teenagers should put it to good use. It is quite easy for us to find useful information