四级写作之漫画作文辅导.pptxVIP

writing;写作概述 实际样例参考运用（模考分析+下发资料） 写作语法黄金结构 高分策略之词汇替换 高分策略之句型多样化 评分标准及建议 ;概述 ;;你知道四级的答题顺序吗?;全国大学英语四级考试答题卡1;全国大学英语四级考试答题卡2;1. 审题（1-2mins) 2. 构思提纲 (3-5mins，确定主题) 3. 写文章 (20mins) 4. 修改检查 (5mins) ;Steps; TIPS: 2. 漫画的内容一定要符合图片， 切忌无中生有！！！（模考作文问题二） The boy thought deeply The boy feel ashemed and says nothing. The boy stops playing and learning a lot. The boy is making a plan and the grandpa is encouraing him ;para2：全文的核心段 give your opinion about the phenomenon conveyed in the picture and interpret its meaning/message? ?揭示主题（观点）并加以解释和说明论证;揭示现象(问题)并阐述现象（问题）产生的原因。 TIPS：可以从2-3个方面进行阐述，也可以将这部分分为两段。 ;Para3.：give your conclusion. (a) 提出建议，重申观点 主题句 (b) 对如何解决漫画中所反映的问题提出合理建议或总结观点。 TIPS：主题句的复述不是简单地重复，通常需符合 如果在段末，用强调词转换方式连接。 与主题句保持意思一致，更进一层。 转换方式：词对应，同根，逆向 ;EXAMPLES;实例运用+模考分析 ;模考一;一、语法问题;3. There be 句型使用错误 eg: 1. There are many young people waste time to do some boring things. 2. There have a problem in the future if we dont have life plan. 4. 被动语态的使用错误 eg: 1. as shows in the picture,the boy is... 2. everyone has a life plan, maybe not write... 3. The first Confucius Institute build in 2004 4. confucius institutes set to spread chinese culture. ;4. run-on sentences 串句无法理解的句子 EG: 1. There are many this phenomenons 2. if everything is a lie, we arent need a life plan. 3. Other people making a life plan from sth. 4. As a young people, we should have.... ;二、佳句欣赏;三、看图作文的解题思路应用;2. 作文提纲 （结构）;The picture depicts a young man sitting in front of a computer and typing something with his grandfather standing behind. The caption below says, “When you write your autobiography in old age, you’ll see where you have been, but when you write your autobiography at a young age, you’ll see where you’re going.” It reveals profoundly that young people should shape their own future and make their own life plans, which is cosistent with what I advocate;第二段：解释图画深刻含义 （揭示主题）并加以解释和说明论证。;第三段：给出自己的看法（总结全文，强调正确的做法）