冀教版9年级英语-Unit 7-写作素养提升练.pptVIP

习题链接 素材典藏 经典例题 写作实践 写作素养提升练 冀教版九年级下 Unit 7 Work for Peace 本单元的主题是“Work for Peace”。人际关系话题是中考功能话题之一，与之相关的话题作文主要是谈论“亲人、同学、朋友之间的争议及解决方法”。一般要求学生介绍某次矛盾的解决过程，谈论与之相关的体会或者就某个问题的解决提出建议等。 冀教版九年级下 常用词汇： deal with, be out of service, Me neither, text message, break down, the day before yesterday, jump in, in the end, provide…for, reach an agreement, take…as, since then, suffer, after all, mean to, have a fight with 常用句型： 1. I still remember what happened between…and... 2. Being a friend, you must understand each other. 3. It’s important for us to... 4. I get angry because… 5. Then…realized…and said sorry to… 6. Thanks to…everything is well now. 7. I hope we can be friends forever. 8. I hope we can get along well with each other. 宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾，多一份宽容就会多一缕阳光。某英文网站正在开展以“包容、谅解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文描述生活中你原谅他人的一次经历，主要内容包括：你们之间发生了什么，你为什么原谅对方以及原谅对方之后你的感受。 提示词语：hurt, realize, forgive, happy 提示问题：What happened between you and him/her? Why did you decide to forgive him/ her? How did you feel after forgiving him/ her? 要求：1. 条理清晰，语句通顺。 2. 80 词左右。 【审题指导】 1. 体裁：记叙文 2. 人称：以第一人称为主 3. 时态：主要使用一般过去时 【思路构建】 【范文赏析】 I still remember what happened between my friend Tom and me. I like collecting stamps and I spent lots of time on it. Tom is my friend and he likes stamps, too. One day, while he was admiring my stamps, he made one of my stamps dirty. I was so angry with him and I shouted at him. Since then, we hadn’t talked to each other for several days. However, my English teacher heard about this and asked us to come to her office to talk it out. Finally, he said sorry to me and I forgave what he did. I learned a deep lesson from this. As good friends, we shouldn’t be mad about each other. The relationship between friends should be one filled with love, care and understanding. 点评：1. 开篇点题，说明故事发生的背景。 2. 正文按照起因—经过—结果的顺序叙述。 3. 结尾部分谈论自己的感受，呼应开头。 4. 文章多处运用了短语：between…and, spend…on, be angry with, shout at, say sorry to 等。 假如你是李华, 现实生活中你遇到了一些烦恼。你兴趣广泛，喜欢唱歌、画画、体育运动等，所有这些给你带来很多快乐，但是你的妈妈担心你因