基础写作人物介绍.ppt

基础写作人物介绍 【基础写作实例剖析：】 你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英 语写一篇短文（只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容），介绍 自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。 姓名 李华 出生年月 1977年2月 出生地 辽宁大连 学历 1984——1990 光明小学 1990——1996 大连市第六中学 所学主要课程 语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑 特长 英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名） 业余爱好 游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐 【实例剖析：】 【写作分析】通过认真审题，根据记叙文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点： 文体：记叙文 人称: 根据内容可确定本文人称为第一人称 要点：李华的出生年月 及地点；学历；所学主 要课程；特长；获奖情 况；业余爱好。 【实例剖析：】 短语及句型： be born in, after that, be good at/ do well in, graduate, the main subjects, win first prize, enjoy doing 【One possible version:】 ① My name is Li Hua. ② I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in February 1977. ③ I started school in 1984 when I was seven and I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990, after that I went to No. 6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. ④ The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer, in which English and computer are my favourite, furthermore, last year I won first prize in the school computer competition. ⑤ When I am free, I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps, and my favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter. 范例：请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。 出 生 1923年5月，香港。 个人经历 1、7岁丧父，家境贫困; 2、1955年后，经营建筑、航运、石油等，成为国内外知名人士; 3、改革开放 (the reform and open policy) 以来，先后捐资支持教育、文化、体育、和福利事业款项达100多亿港元。 影 响 成为“感动中国”的人物。 ［写作要求］ 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 要点分析： 名人介绍， 采用第三人称将提供的信息整合 以一般过去时态为主。 One possible version: ① In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born from a poor family in Hong Kong. ② At the age of ten, his father died. ③ After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad. ④ Since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in Mainland.? ⑤ He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a Moving China hero. 2006年高考英语书面表达试题北京卷 国际文化交流中心