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大学英语作文错误分析 19. The Qualities of the Teacher Pm a student in a Normal University. (1)F11 become a teacher in the future. But there are some necessary qualities to be a teacher(2)? Firstly, you must love your caree匚 Because if you dorf I have interest in teaching students, youll have no motivate and enthusiastic (3)to do it. You will always complain your work (4) “nd get tired of it? Secondly, you should be capable of great Datience(5)? This is largely a matter of self-training. It makes great demands on nervous energy to teach students. (6)We must have patience with students when they make mistakes. Finally, teachers should communicate with students constantly. Without communication with each other, we can^t understand what they (7)are thinking (8)and how we can help them catch up with good-study (9)students or get out (10)the shadow. As for me, Fll try my best to teach students and to be a good teache匚 点评：本文整体结构清晰， 前后连贯，表达思想清楚。但存在一些细节问题，如 1. 单词大小写错误 ( 划线 1：在这句话中， nonnal和 university 不是专有名词，不应该大写 ) 。 2. 单词词性使用错误 ( 划线 3 : no 后面应该接名词 , 而 motivate 和 enthusiastic分别为动词 和形容 词，应该改为 motivation, enthusiasm) 3. 中式英语错误。受到汉语思维的影响，本文出现多处中式英语。 ( 划线 2: to be a teacher的主 语应该是人，不能用 there be 结构 , 此句应改为 But I know one needs some necessaryqualities to become a teacher；划线 5：应该是 具有”耐心，不是“会”耐心，故应改为 have great patience; 划线 9：成绩好的学生，直接说 good students即可; 另外划线 6 也是中式英语， 表达不地道 ) 4. 搭配错误 ( 划线 4： complain 是不及物动词， 只有先接介词 about 后才能接宾语； 划线 thinking 后而也应该接介词 about;划线 10：固定搭配 get out of,意为 走出…”，介词 of 不能省略 ) 5. 代词使用错误 ( 划线 7: they 指向不明确，应该改为 the poor-performing students)