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第 第 PAGE 10 页 共 25 页 短文改错专题解析版 【山东省试验中学 2021 届高三上学期第三次诊断】 短文改错（共 10 小题,每道题 1 分,满分 10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文； 作文中共有 10 处语言错误 ,每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改； 增加 :在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词；删除 :在错的词下划一横线 ,并在该词下面写出修改后的词；留意 :1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 只答应修改 10 处,多者（从第 11 处起）不计分； Dear Thomas, I feel sorry to know your worries about getting fatter and fatter so that you have failed the sports test. Nothing can be more disappointment than that. |精. |品. |可. |编. |辑. |资. |料.  As far as I am concerned, there are many reasons cause your failure in a test. Firstly, you are very lazy to have regular sports. In fact, sports can help you keep fit and energy. Secondly, you eat too much meat, that makes you gain weight easily. Finally, you sleep more than you need. There was no denying that it is all these things that have caused your problem and your worries. As I stated above, you should first eat less meat but more fruits and vegetable. And then you should have regular sports so that you can burn the fat that builds up in your body and to become slim. Hope my advice is some help to you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 71.disappointment → disappointing 72.加 that/which;cause → causing 73.a → the 74.very → too energy → energetic 76.that → which was → is vegetable → vegetables 去掉 and/to 加 of |精. |品. |可. |编. |辑. |资. |料.  72. 加 that/which;cause → causi考ng查关系词；可看成是一句从句，也可把 cause 看成非谓语动词，所以加 that/which;cause →causin；g 73.a → the考查冠词；上文已经提到是体育测试了，此处特指，故用 the ； very → to考o 查副词； Too...to..结构，表示太 以至于不能 ，故用 too energy → energeti考c 查形容词； Keep energetic 保持活力，用 energetic ； that → whic考h 查关系词；非限制性定语从句，故用 which ；77.was → is考查动词时态；本文使用一般现在时，用 is； vegetable → vegetab考les查名词；可数名词用复数，所以用 vegetables； 去掉 and/to 考查连词和介词；可以表示一个结果，也可以表示并列，但是这两者不能并存，去掉 and/to ； 加 of 考查介词； Be of +名词与这个名词的形容词成效一样，加 of ；考点：考查了动词，介词，冠词，名词，形容词，时态等的用法 【学法指导】 在短文改错中常显现的错误主要有以下几类： 名词单复数用错，可数与不行数名词的混用；比如第 78 小题 more fruits and vegetable ， 可数名词用复数，所以用 vegetables； 动词：时态和语态，常显现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现 象；或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物动词后加了宾语；