公开课课件 如何在高考英语作文中增加细节.pptx

Howtoaddreasonabledetailstoyourarticle 第一页，共20页。广东(guǎng dōng)一模书面表达假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：1.简述时间过程; 2.交代护照相关信息; 3.委托报社刊登(kāndēng)招领启事.注意:1.词数100左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第二页，共20页。一个(yī ɡè)问题主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不足100词，怎么(zěn me)弥补词数？ 需要“适当(shìdàng)增加细节，以使行文连贯”。第三页，共20页。Dear editor, I’m LiHua, a high school student in our city. I’m writing to tell you a piece of urgent information. I picked up a passport last Sunday in the subway station when I was taking a ride home. There was nobody around when I found it on a waiting bench. The owner of it is Steven who comes from England. Having lost the passport, he must be very anxious, but I have no idea how to return it to him. So I need your help. I wish you could post a notice on your newspaper to tell him about the missing passport, so that he can get it back. I would appreciate it if you could do me the favor. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua同位语具体化心理(xīnlǐ)感受原因结果(jiē guǒ)交际(jiāojì)语第四页，共20页。如何适当增加(zēngjiā)细节增加同位语补全前因后果(qián yīn hòu guǒ)或目的适当将写作内容具体化写出个人感受、评价或后果补充功能性（交际性）语言第五页，共20页。What kind of information can often be added to your article?1 增加(zēngjiā)同位语 Chairman of the Students’ Union of my school.1 I am LiHua, _________________________________ (我们学校的学生会主席). / _________________________________________(来自(lái zì)中国的一位交换生). 2. I want to have a pen friend, ________________________________________ (希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).an exchange student from China.hopefully a girl with interests similar to mine.第六页，共20页。2.补充前因后果(qián yīn hòu guǒ)或目的(1) Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese traditional culture,___________________________________________(因为(yīn wèi)知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），I am writing to invite you to participate in this activity. (2)In order to get some practical experience,______________________________________________________________________(为了(wèi le)获得一些实践经验) I’m planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.(3)Since I have the experience of losing my ID card,__