中石化英语分级测试写作.ppt

1. 分级测试写作试题简介 2.分级测试写作评分标准 3.商务信函和图表的写作技巧和注意事项 Memorandum TO: All Night Staff From: W.B. White Date: Oct 21st, 2002 Subject: New Uniforms Message: As a result of yesterday’s meeting, night employees are now required to wear company-issued uniforms. Failure to wear your uniform will result in a pay-cut. Please come to the service desk by Friday to pick up your uniform. If you cannot pick up your uniform by Friday, please inform the service desk (extension 32) as soon as possible. Thank you. Exercises Julian is writing to Karen to give her the bad news that their project has been canceled by the regional head office. The reason is that the company is involved in a lawsuit. He requests Karen to return the data and files related to the project. Suppose you are Julian. Write an E-mail to Karen. And then answer the E-mail. Samples Dear Karen, I regret to tell you that the project has been canceled by the regional head office because of the lawsuit against us. Could you please send back all the data we collected, and any other files you may have regarding this project. Thanks, Julian Dear Julian, Thanks for your message. I’m very sorry to learn about the project cancellation and the company’s legal problems. I hope we get the chance to work on another project together again soon. I have attached the files as you requested. Best wishes, Karen Part Two Graph writing 图表作文应关注 1.图表描述段落是否有概述图表趋势的句子即 Topic Sentence。 2.图表描述段落是否充分，重要信息是否体现对比和比较。 3.评价段落是否按题目要求写出图表的趋势影响。是否有层次，语言组织是否有逻辑，是否有一定形式的结论。 图表作文的篇章结构　写图表作文时，常采用三段式的谋篇方式。 第一段：用文字描述图表，客观解释图表中所传递信息并找出某种规律或趋势。 第二段：就图表中所反映的某种趋势或问题分析其原因或后果。 第三段：展望未来的情况或提出解决问题的办法或建议。 图表作文常用的句型 常用的开篇句型 1. According to the table/pie chart/bar graph /curve/line chart/flow chart, we can see/conclude that … 2. The table/graph reveals (shows/indicates/illustrates/ represents/points out) that … 3.