托福写作解析：年轻人比以前更乐于助人.docxVIP

Word文档下载后（可任意编辑） 第 第 PAGE 1 页 共 NUMPAGES 1 页 托福写作解析：年轻人比以前更乐于助人  托福备考：2019托福写作范文解析：年轻人比以前更乐于助人  托福考试精品VIP提升课程  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Young people today are more likely to help others than young people in the past.  【译文】你是否同意下面的陈述：现今年轻人比以前更乐于助人  【解析】有了解过托福考试官方指南(Official Guide)的同学都应该知道独立写作5分原始分标准里面的第1条是“有效地回应写作话题和任务”  具体来说，就是要求各位同学在看到题目之后，可以选用2-3个论点去论证自己的主要立场，这个立场就是全文的总论点，英文是‘Thesis’。很多同学的问题在于，在文章开头可以提出一个很清晰的立场，同时头脑中大概也能想到支撑该立场的原因，但是在真正开始写主体段的时候，所用的表达方式、所写的句子就会让人看得云里雾里!换句话说，就是没有很好地把关键内容——整个段落里面的‘核心’用一句话写下来，这句话叫做文章的主题句，英文是‘Topic Sentence’ (TS)。那么如何解决这个问题呢?接下来我们就以下面这篇范文一起来探讨一下。  In our country there has always been a spirit of volunteerism. As children, we are taught that helping those less fortunate is our responsibility. But unfortunately, the growing prosperity of the nation has placed an emphasis on materialism and individual success, creating a generation of youth that do not understand the meaning of being selfless. I believe young people today are not as charitable as previous generations of young people.  【译文】在我们国家，始终有一种志愿精神的精神。从孩子时代起，我们就被教育说，帮助那些不幸的人是我们的责任。但不幸的是，这个国家日益增长的繁荣把重点放在了物质主义和个人成功上，造就了一代不懂得无私的人。我认为今天的年轻人不像前几代年轻人那样仁慈。  【解析】很多同学在拿到一个独立写作题目的时候，所面临的第1个难点就是不知道该如何开头。单刀直入的In my opinion，I agree…觉得太过简单粗暴，而花式开头又不知该从何入手。本文通过描述与该题材关键词相关的一些社会现状、现象、问题、趋势等内容来引入话题。然后直截了当的表明倾向性立场。不过建议可以注意对“我认为”的表达，尽量避免使用“I think”、“I believe”等比较俗套的短语，可以使用比如“From my own perspective”, “I am inclined to”, “I am prone to”等表达方式。  The main reasons I am so skeptical of the inclination of today’s youth to help people is that they are spoiled. I remember when I was young and using a computer at the public library was a privilege. When my parents bought me my own computer when I went to university, I understood how much they sacrificed to give me that as a present. Nowadays, children see expensive computers, like the iPad and iPhone, as a necessity, not a privilege. They receive all these kinds of gifts with